English essay: Finding what you have lost
I am an engineer, job folder is very important for my work. When I work in laboratory, I always keep the folder in my hand, I can write down anything that I find during experiments. It is convenient for me.
I lost one of my folders yesterday. It was just missing. I looked for it in my office and laboratory, I asked everyone, I couldn't find it out. I prepared another folder today, all files had been re-written. I spent nearly whole day to re-do the experiments because all data were lost with the folder.
I finished all before getting off work finally. I went to the meeting room to have a cup of coffee to relax. Oh my God! My lost folder lies on the table. I thought about it, I had a short meeting with one client in this meeting room yesterday and I put my folder on the table. I forgot to bring it back after I said goodbye to my client!
Now I have two folders for one case.
英語短文:尋找你失去的東西
我是一名工程師,工作文件夾對我的工作非常重要。當(dāng)我在實驗室工作時,我總是把文件夾拿在手里,我可以寫下我在實驗中發(fā)現(xiàn)的任何東西。這對我來說很方便。
昨天我丟了一個文件夾。它就是不見了。我在辦公室和實驗室找過了,我問過每個人,都沒找到。我今天準(zhǔn)備了另一個文件夾,所有的文件都被重寫了。我花了幾乎一整天的時間重新做實驗,因為所有的數(shù)據(jù)都隨著文件夾丟失了。
我終于在下班前把這些工作都做完了。我去會議室喝杯咖啡放松一下。哦我的上帝!我丟失的文件夾放在桌子上。我想了想,昨天我和一個客戶在這個會議室開了個短會,然后我把文件夾放在桌子上。我跟客戶告別后忘了還回來了!
現(xiàn)在我有兩個文件夾來處理一個案例。
最后我們來看看老師對于這篇essay的評論:
Overall Teacher Comments
Dear student, thank you for your very interesting submission, it was a pleasure to read. You need to work on word limit, capitalisation, and spelling. Instead of writing "T lost my one of my folders" you can write it as "I lost one of my folders". A definite article such as "the" is used to refer to a specific instance of the noun, often already mentioned in the context Or easy to identify. "Use an before words beginning with vowels or when a consonant initial has a vowel sound. All proper nouns like the names of people, places, profession, nationality, days, months, etc, need to be capitalized. The pronoun 'T' always needs to be capitalized. Word limits are prescribed not to make it difficult for the student but to enable him to write better and improve at every level, in order to enhance his vocabulary and writing skills. So please give importance to the word limit and send another writing for uation, pertaining to the word limit. Good luck- Tricy I
親愛的學(xué)生,感謝您非常有趣的投稿,讀起來非常愉快。你需要注意字?jǐn)?shù)限制、資本化和拼寫。你可以把它寫成“我丟失了一個文件夾”而不是“don ' T lost my one of my folders”。定冠詞,如“the”,用來指名詞的一個具體實例,通常在上下文中已經(jīng)提到或很容易識別。在以元音開頭的單詞或輔音開頭有元音的單詞前使用an。所有專有名詞,如人名、地名、職業(yè)、國籍、日期、月份等,都需要大寫。代詞“T”總是需要大寫。字?jǐn)?shù)限制不是為了給學(xué)生造成困難,而是為了讓他的寫作水平提高,以提高他的詞匯量和寫作技巧。因此,請重視字?jǐn)?shù)限制,并發(fā)送另一篇關(guān)于字?jǐn)?shù)限制的作文進(jìn)行評估。祝你好運。
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